First day
My mom looked down into the box camera. I smiled from the first step of the bus.
I wore a green wool sweater. I tilted my head down a little. And I wonder what kind of boy I’d been if I’d
have had my chin up and eyes out. Getting on the bus first day of school.
richard c rutherford
Characterizations:
funny, well written
Oh! Nice word picture of a young boy. Can we see the photo?
I love the wondering.