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First day




My mom looked down into the box camera. I smiled from the first step of the bus.

I wore a green wool sweater. I tilted my head down a little. And I wonder what kind of boy I’d been if I’d

have had my chin up and eyes out. Getting on the bus first day of school.



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Characterizations: funny, well written


  1. Oh! Nice word picture of a young boy. Can we see the photo?

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